My first draft for my music video of 'the man who can't be moved'

I have a basic narrative structure with an open ended subjective moral. The video is not finished and still needs a further 1 min 30 sec's added on. I like the basic narrative arc however looking at conventions I have noticed I am missing one of the key features of a music video, being, the performance element, so i am going to do more filming so i can add it in. This will insure that it is more recognisable as a music video rather than looking like a short film due to it's narrative structure.